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上海新航道雅思小編給考生們帶來了劍6Test4雅思寫作Task2大作文范文+解析,希望幫助考生對照文本更好的研究真題,充分備考,爭取理想成績,實現留學夢想。
劍6Test4雅思寫作Task2題目:
Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
劍6Test4雅思寫作Task2范文(一):
In modern society, there are two types of lives. Some people like to lead a stable life, without change. Others prefer changing to static. Both kinds of people have their admittedly reasons to support themselves.
The ones who advocate steady life is comfortable give their points as follows. First of all, long-term of work can provide a reliable source of income. Changing jobs frequently maybe hard for a family to live comfortable. Secondly, movement of home is quite usual. This activity can cost you a great deal of finance to deal with this problem. Besides, shuttling among different kinds of job cannot make you gather the experience of a type of subject. Because you often change the way to face the subjects while changing your jobs. After few decades, you may still a freshman in your job.
On the contrary, audacious young people like changable life much better than the people above who are interested in steadly life. They are convinced that diversity of life is a treasure of our experience. When we grow more mature in considering questions. What's more, when we change our life styles, we indeed get a quality of how to adapt new life. According to the mental research, people who own adaption ability may hardly feel lonely, and the risk of develop psychologic illness can be dicreased. So changing lives can groom the qualities of youngsters.
For my part, I would like to share the last point of view. Because I am a young man now, so changing life is a good opportunity for the people like me to join into the society and develop the ability of adapting new life styles.
劍6Test4雅思寫作Task2范文(二):
This model has been prepared by an examiner as an example of a very good answer. However, please note that this is just one example out of many possible approaches.
Over the last half century the pace of change in the life of human beings has increased beyond our wildest expectations. This has been driven by technological and scientific breakthroughs that are changing the whole way we view the world on an almost daily basis. This means that change is not always a personal option, but an inescapable fact of life, and we need to constantly adapt to keep pace with it.
Those people who believe they have achieved some security by doing the same, familiar things are living in denial. Even when people believe they are resisting change themselves, they cannot stop the world around them from changing. Sooner or later they will find that the familiar jobs no longer exist, or that the ‘safe’ patterns of behaviour are no longer appropriate.
However, reaching the conclusion that change is inevitable is not the same as assuming that ‘change is always for the better’. Unfortunately, it is not always the case that new things are promoted because they have good impacts for the majority of people. A lot of innovations are made with the aim of making money for a few. This is because it is the rich and powerful people in our society who are able to impose changes (such as in working conditions or property developments) that are in their own interests.
In conclusion, I would say that change can be stimulating and energising for individuals when they pursue it themselves, but that all change, including that which is imposed on people, does not necessarily have good outcomes.
題解
一些人喜歡一輩子都做同樣的事情,避免變化。而其他人認為變化總是好事。討論這兩種觀點并提出你的看法。
參考譯文
過去半個世紀人類生活的變化速度遠遠超出我們的想象。這一變化是由于科技突破推動的,這些科技進步幾乎每天都在改變我們看待世界的方式。這意味著變化并不總是個人的選擇,而是無法回避的生活事實,而我們需要不斷適應以趕上變化。
那些相信可以通過做同樣的、熟悉的事情來獲得某種安全感的人們是在自欺欺人。即便人們認為他們自己在抵制變化,他們也無法阻止周圍世界的變化。他們遲早會發現熟悉的工作不再存在,或者行為的“安全”模式不再合適。
但是,得出變化不可避免的結論不等于假設“變化總會變得更好”。不幸的是,新事物被推動并不總是因為對大多數人有好處。許多革新的目的是為少數人謀利。這是因為正是我們社會里有錢和有權的人們才有能力施加有助于他們自己的利益的變化(比如在工作環境或者地產發展方面)。
總之,我認為變化對于那些追逐變化的人們來說是令人興奮,鼓舞人心的,但并不是所有的變化都必定會有好結果,這其中也包含施加于人的變化。
分析
本文和Test 2一樣,都是Discuss類考題。但本文的寫作結構和論證過程與Test 2的范文有一定區別。
Test 2的第一段話純粹交代事實,而本文的開頭指出變化無處不在,也無法避免,融進了作者的觀點,表明避免變化是不可能的。
第二段話不是分析反方的觀點,而是直接反駁觀點一的理由。第三段話也并沒有論證正方的觀點,而是指出觀點二的理由并不總能立住腳,指出變化并不總是會變得更好,而只是使得少數掌握資源的人變得更好,其他人則無法支配變化。
結尾總結觀點,指出變化對于那些主動追求變化、能掌控變化的人來說是好的,而對于其他人,尤其是被動面對變化的人來說則未必如此。
總的來說,本文并沒有采用完全平衡式的論證方法,最后表明自己傾向于某種觀點,而是指出兩種觀點在某種程度上的合理之處以及局限所在,從而得出自己的看法。這種寫法比較適合Discuss中兩種觀點都不夠完善,無法完全同意的情況。
大漠點評:
題目
Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing.
認真看一下這個題目,狡猾狡猾的,因為這個話題的兩個觀點不是完全對立的,而是從不同的角度來表述這個問題:一方面,一些人拒絕改變(拒絕改變是一種結果,其原因可能是不喜歡改變或是害怕改變,甚至是不知道周圍是變化的);另一方面,一些人認為改變經常是件好事(認為改變是件好事是一種觀點,也就是原因,可能行為是嘗試新鮮事物等)。所以回答這個問題就不存在中立、傾向或一邊倒,而是把問題一個個回答掉。
第一段:
Over the last half century the pace of change in the life of human beings has increased beyond our wildest expectations.
介紹背景,老調重彈
beyond 詞組經常用到: beyond doubt 毋容置疑;
beyond recognition 無可辨認;
beyond expectations 不可想象;
This has been driven by technological and scientific breakthroughs that can changing the whole way we view the world on an almost daily basis.
這句話說明technological and scientific breakthroughs 產生了兩個作用 drive this (the pace of change has increased); change the whole way we view the world, 很是狡猾
This means that change is not always a personal option, but an inescapable fact of life, and we need to constantly adapt to keep pace with it.
實際上開始接觸到第一問題了,not a person option, but an inescapable fact of life的這句很有哲理,而且經常用到,大家記住
第二段
Those people who believe they have achieved some security by doing the same, familiar things are living in denial.
直接回答文章的第一問,those people are living in denial
in denial 介詞短語,拒絕承認事實(refusing to admit the truth or reality of something unpleasant),舉例a patient in denial about his health problems
Even when people believe they are resisting change themselves, they cannot stop the world around them from changing.
解釋他們“生活在一種不愿面對真相的狀態中 live in denial”
When [conj]: although 盡管,表轉折,并非常見的表時間
Sooner or later they will find that the familiar jobs no longer exist, or that the ‘safe’ patterns of behavior are no longer appropriate.
接著解釋 they will find that .. . that
第三段
However, reaching the conclusion that change is inevitable is not the same as assuming that ‘change is always for the better’.
相當于把兩問都給否定了,A is not the same as B
句子用詞的多樣化:
Reaching the conclusion對應assuming
Evitable 對應首段的 inescapable
Unfortunately, it is not always the case that news things are prompted because they have good impacts for the majority of people.新事物被推動并不總是因為對大多數人有好處
接著解釋,it is not always the case, case指reality 事實
解釋原因的著力點 the majority of people,就是“是否代表最廣大人們的根本利益”,看看老外學“三個代表”真是活學活用
A lot of innovations are made with the aim of making money for a few. This is because it is the rich and powerful people in our society who are able to impose changes (such as in working conditions or property developments) that are in their interests.這是因為正是我們社會里有錢和有權的人們才有能力推動符合他們自己的利益的變化(比如在工作環境或者房地產發展方面)。
結果,It is because +原因,前果后因的因果關系,大家多學習學習
It is people who…that 多層復合關系的從句結構需搞清楚
Such as文章舉例,使其具體化
Sth is in one’s interest 符合某人的利益, be in the public/national interest
第四段:
In conclusion, I would say that change can be stimulating and energizing for individuals when they pursue it themselves, but that all change, including which is imposed on people, does not necessarily have good outcomes.總之,我認為變化對于那些追逐變化的人們來說是令人興奮,鼓舞人心的,但并不是所有的變化都必定會有好結果,這其中也包含施加于人的變化。
I would say標志著我的觀點的正式出現,而且把兩個問題回答強調一下
Pursue對應第一問中的avoid,not have good outcomes回答了第二問
審題
這個題目很陰險,不是簡單的是非問題,而是同一個話題兩種不同觀點,但觀點的側重點又有所不同,那好辦,就一個問題一個問題解決。
問題一:Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. 世界是變化的,你只能使用變化,而非逃避變化;
問題二:Others think that change is always a good thing,變化有可能都是好事,有時也是壞事
框架
第一段:這一段談談背景,引入話題。由于技術的進步,變化無處不在,體現在兩個方面:人類生活節奏加快和我們看待世界的看法。這是個誰也逃避不了的現實。
第二段:回答題目的第一問,喜歡做熟悉事情的人是不愿意承認事實,應為這是他們逃避不了的現實,很快他們就會發現他們熟悉的工作不存在,或者是安全的行為方式不合適。
第三段:回答題目的第二問,開頭這句話得將二三兩段聯系起來,所以就說改變是不可避免的并不等同于改變總是好的。因為有些改變只符合權貴的利益,并不有利于廣大人民群眾。
第四段:結尾段,得把兩個問題聯系起來,做一個簡單的歸納。當人們主動追求變化時,這個改變就是令人振奮的,但并不是所有的變化都會產生積極的后果。
假如是我?
看到這個問題,頭腦里閃出的就是有句歌詞“不是我不明白,是因為世界變化快。”一看這兩個問題,還是很好回答的,下面就開始吧。
第一段:介紹背景,無論是誰,都是這一套
第二段:回答第一個問題,拒絕變化的的做法是不可能的。因為變化時恒定存在的,而且個人來講不能懼怕變化,積極的面對變化,有時能使人得到更大的發展,所以叫做opportunity
第三段:回答第二個問題,變化的結構有好有壞,如核技術的發明,可以用來發電,服務人類,也可用來制造核武器,毀滅人類,所以科學技術的變化帶來的雙重影響。
第四段:再次強調自己的觀點,既然變化是肯定存在的,我們就必須積極面對,同時積極的杜絕消極的影響,讓變化造福人類等。
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