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支招小作文（148） | 地圖一個碼頭的今昔對比

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摘要：支招小作文（148） | 地圖一個碼頭的今昔對比

支招小作文（148） | 地圖一個碼頭的今昔對比

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[2023.6.25] The following two pictures show the changes of buildings in Liverton Docks between 1980 and present.

【主體段分段】：按照變化分段，每段內部對比
Body 1：river前后對比
Body 2：河流北岸，前后對比
Body 3：河流南岸，前后對比

【開頭段】
The maps compare the layout of Liverton Docks as it was in 1980 and today.

【概述段】
Overall, great changes have taken place to Liverton Docks. Obviously, more leisure facilities have been constructed.
思路要點:
- 變化大
- 出現更多娛樂休閑設施

【Body 1】
It is clear from the first map that in 1980, the given area was divided by a river, where there were some ships. Also, on the right side, a bridge ran across the river from the north to the south. At present, however, these ships and the bridge have disappeared, butwe can see the addition of a boat museum in the center of the river to the left.
思路要點：
- 1980：一條河流將該區域分為2部分，河流中停有船只；一座橋橫跨河流
- Now：船只、bridge消失，新建一個boat museum

【Body 2】
Looking at the northern side of the river in 1980, it is clear that a crane was located in the middle, with one warehouse to the west and another one to the east. Currently, although the warehouse on the northeastern corner has remained unchanged, the other two facilities have been replaced by a converted building and kids’ restrooms.
思路要點: 河流北面
- 1980：中央是crane，兩邊是warehouse
- Now：東北角的warehouse不變，其余2處被取代

【Body 3】
On the opposite side, we can see a footpath along the river bank, and there was another set of crane and warehouse to the right. Now, there have been no changes to the former warehouse, but a hotel has been newly built on the original site of the crane. Besides, a new building has appeared on the southwestern corner.
思路要點: 河流另一面
- 1980：有footpath、crane、warehouse
- Now：warehouse，新建hotel和一個new building

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