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7月1日雅思大作文示范寫作 | 通訊科技的利與弊

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摘要：7月1日雅思大作文示范寫作 | 通訊科技的利與弊

7月1日雅思大作文示范寫作 | 通訊科技的利與弊

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2023年7月1日雅思大作文題目
With the rapid development of communication technology such as smart phones, tablets and other mobile devices, some people think the advantages outweigh its disadvantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (2023/07/01)

范文及解析
Introduction
As communication technologies like smart phones and tablets have penetrated into every nook and cranny of the society, people always are phubbing regardless of occasions ranging from travelling on a train to dining at a restaurant, or even strolling. From my own perspective, such electric gadgets, in spite of some dark sides, have brought tangible boons in our daily lives.

解析
典型的科技類考題，論述通訊科技帶來的積極消極影響，整體并沒有什么限定信息，難度較小；
? every nook and cranny 每個角落；
? phubbing v．低頭族現象；
? tangible adj.明確的，真實的；可觸摸的；
? boon n.裨益，優勢，有用的東西；

Body 1
First and foremost, it has become incredibly easy for people to contact each other electronically. Gone are the days when people could only communicate via fixed telephone or writing letters which took several days to reach others. People in modern age can stay connected with family members, friends and colleagues through instant messaging on various social apps to create a more closely-knit bond. Overseas students, for example, can video chat with parents to allay a sense of homesickness. Besides, these electronic devices, in large part, expand people’s social circle. Instead of being confined by physical factors such as geographical distance, people in digital era , due to the pervasive use of mobile phones and the Internet, can get acquainted with more like-minded people who are even living thousands of miles away.

解析
通訊科技的發展帶來的好處：
(1) 極大地方便了人與人之間的交流；
(2) 擴大了人們的社交圈；
? closely-knit 緊緊結合在一起的
? allay vt.減輕；使緩和；使平靜
? pervasive adj.彌漫的，遍布的
? acquainted adj.相識的，認識的；

Body 2
Furthermore, communication technology has revolutionized various industries. It is the mobile apps and online courses that allow people accessible to an assortment of information we are intrigued by, thus augmenting their understanding of subjects and supplementing their studies. In terms of medical care, by remotely monitoring, breathtakingly demanding surgical operations can be successfully performed with pundits with penetrating views. Also, online commerce and transaction, with our job commitment being accomplished by sending emails, discussing business matters or conducting trade transactions online, allow users greater freedom and flexibility.

解析
通訊科技的發展也革新推動了其它各領域的發展：
(1) 使得教育資源的獲取更容易；
(2) 醫療資源的共享；
(3) 商業往來的靈活度和自由度；
? assortment n.各種各樣，混合
? augment v.增加，增大；加強
? breathtakingly adv.驚人地；
? pundit n.專家；博學者；

Body 3
Notwithstanding technological stride, never should we downplay the irreplaceability of face-to-face communication, which is gradually being vitiated by the undue use of the Internet and mobile phones. Without sincere eye-contact, warm handshake or other essential physical cues in front of our interlocutors, the bond of people is very hard to be tightened and the dearth of trust gradually emerges among people. By this token, digital interaction, depriving people of real face-to-face exchange, is prone to deteriorate our relationship with beloved family members or neighbors in the vicinity, which will occasion human indifference as well as a strong feeling of alienation.

解析
通訊科技的發展也帶來造成了一定的問題，最明顯的就是對于人們社交能力的影響：
? notwithstanding prep.雖然，盡管
? stride n.進展，進步；
? downplay v.對……輕描淡寫；輕視，貶低
? vitiate vt.損害，弄壞；
? undue adj.不適當的，過分的；
? dearth n.缺乏；
? deteriorate v.惡化，變壞

Conclusion
To recapitulate, in spite of the downsides brought by state-of-the-art communication technology, the modern digital technology , as long as it is properly harnessed, is still of great avail both in our life and work.

解析
總結前文
? recapitulate vi.概括；重述要點；
? state-of-the-art adj.最先進的；達到最高水準的
? harnessed v.控制并利用；
? avail n.效用，利益

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